Magazines pages before feedback

My front cover for my magazine, the blue text blends in too much with the background, creating confusion making it harder for the user to read, also the picture is bad quality and doesn't represent the genre very well.

Once again the blue back ground makes it hard for the target audience to read the text in my magazine, i also  think the text is too think much makes it harder to read, another negative is the models in my pictures overlap which wouldn't happen in a real music magazine.
Finally this is my double page spread the blue text once again makes it hard to read. The page its self looks bare and boring which doesn't reflect the title of the band 'Havoc'

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